This story originally was only 3,000 words back in 2002 when I wrote it for an assignment, but as I went over that rather skeletal framework these last few weeks it grew and is still growing. The point of view also split between the two main characters, which mirrors a number of authors I’ve been reading lately. To make the jumps in pov easier for the reader to follow I’ve marked each switch with the first initial of the character’s name. These posts won’t quite fit as ‘chapters’ especially with the jumping so I’ve decided to call them parts instead. The number of parts it’ll be is still unknown as I’m still working on it.
I'm intrigued! I think the POV changes are timed well and allow the story to unfold almost like a dialogue between the two characters, each with their own part of the story to reveal. I was initially a little confused when "she" became "they" in the next scene, though that was eventually explained. Hope you had a happy birthday and thanksgiving! Congrats on the printer :-)
I'm intrigued! I think the POV changes are timed well and allow the story to unfold almost like a dialogue between the two characters, each with their own part of the story to reveal. I was initially a little confused when "she" became "they" in the next scene, though that was eventually explained. Hope you had a happy birthday and thanksgiving! Congrats on the printer :-)